did you ever publish? really missing this story all this time. T_T

Aw...I really wanted to read this. :/ Gah...why do people have to ruin things for the rest of us? People should just come up with their own story instead of stealing from others who actually put time in effort into their work. T.T

There must be a sequel! The ending tore my pathetic heart out. *tear* You're a very talented writer, and I look forward to reading more of your works, ESPECIALLY if you indeed decide to write a sequel. ;

i'm going to read the rest of this tomorrow!

I wanted an Action packed story.. and I started reading this. And well I was sort of hoping for a happy ending.. like usual. But I guess this is ok. But the only thing that is running through my mind right now is like that she can live on, but it is a sad world that she is living in. Or something like that, I think it was from the Draco Trilogy that Cassandra Claire wrote. Or maybe it was from something else... I've been reading too much ahah.

Well at least Aaron knew that she loved him.

~*~Ngoc1231~*~

I love thew way you wrote this whole thing. I'm more a reader than a writer myself but the way you introduced him in this first chapter was skill! Not even cliched a little bit. Just wrote to let you know;)

Mari

I do not think I ever commented your story but I read it a while ago! I loved it but felt pretty sad when Aaron just...(sigh) Great job and I loved the shakespeare line..it's one of my favorite lines that Juliet says.!

Please let there be a sequel! I can't stand sad endings...though it WAS a good ending...I still don't like it. Please write a second!

OMG thats so sad... XC

But good story

no, no not at all

it is awesome!

anymore described would be um...kinda scary

oh, and just to make some random plot bunny happy,

omfg.

omfg

yes, i start all my reviews for awesome chapters that way

anw...i have a theory, and i'm not reaing again until you answer in an email

my theory is that aaron and cedric are the same person, they just shift, and that the person there during the blackout was AARON

is it right? is it right? cuz im not reading further until i find out!

omfg

i love to read books online!

this one is the first one im reading and it just happens to be made of AWESOME

i love it!

oh, and be checking in to see if i post any stories

my friends say they're great

also, i was hoping you might want to email me

my email is or whichever you feel like at the time

set the subjust as "

wow! i loved it! i almost cried when my computer broke down and i couldnt see what was going to happen next ! !

sequel?yes!

Very exciting! :D

A really good story! But you need a box of tissues handy when you read the end. I really liked the quote from Romeo and Juliet at the end. GREAT JOB!

P.S. As we keep on telling you, you need to get it published. I would totally buy it.