Reviews for Moving
tangledwebweweave chapter 1 . 8/8/2007
The format got all screwed up on this one. It was really hard to explain this is words. It's just like, disappointment and anger and upset. I had the first like three lines in my head, singing them. I just had to get them out! Keep reading please.
1406613 chapter 1 . 6/2/2007
Nice rythm, but yes.. sad
the-foresight chapter 1 . 6/2/2007
Nice use of internal ryhme, his had a really good rhythm as well. Good job.