Reviews for A Song About Death
Mao Chen chapter 1 . 7/8/2007
i really liked the 'We’re here to forget the one who withered in the sun..' line. i think that was the best out of the whole piece. because it's true, really. but i stumbled through the beginning until i got to the 'demand to be the fire' line. maybe i couldn't settle into the 'Death' picture fast enough, but after re-reading the beginning after being done, then it made perfect sense.
Sir Scott chapter 1 . 6/2/2007
That was pretty good, although the image of clowns were kind of creepy. I can picture it in my mind clowns filling someone up with ash.

~SirScott
laughing at the trekkies chapter 1 . 6/2/2007
I'm not sure if I fully understood this but I still enjoyed it nonetheless. Loved the choice of words and can't find anything to critisize. Nicely done.