u have seriously got to finish this! this story is awesome!

I love the idea for this story!

I LOVE the first chapter, not so much the second...but whatever.

if you ever think your going to drop this story and delete it could you possibly let me use the first chapter? pretty please? lol, it gave my own imagination a huge boost.

by the way, I completly understand if you said no :D

I'm glad you updated. This story sounds really great. I'm very interested in seeing where you go with it. :) Update as soon as you can.

intriguing. mysterious. nicely paced action. good description. thumbs up.

(ok, that was weird, with all the 'sentences' composed of single/several words. *sighs*)

wow i really like this! good start, i'm very interested to see where this goes!

Hey, I like this beging, I would love to see where this goes.. I hope you conitune to write this story...

Interesting start. I want to see more.

Once again, you set an intriguing story before us... I am totally hooked already. Wonderful! Please update as soon as possible.

this sounds really interesting. You should definately continue.

It seems pretty interesting, I''m curiose to see where it goes.