|Reviews for Crack|
| Matthew James Current chapter 1 . 1/20/2008
That's beautiful and very well done! Bravo. It's a very personal and very you kind of poem. I like how you used the analogy of land for our relationship and how you added your own unique voice and tone to the piece.
The ending was very touching and sadly beautiful. I honestly don't have much to suggest about this poem because it is do uniquely you that to change any part of it would be to lessen its uniqueness and the character of it. I'm pleased to say this reflects a part of your potential and ability as a poet. Keep on writing!
| I Found Myself At 24 chapter 1 . 6/10/2007
Again, such powerful imagery. Well done, hun.