Reviews for Facts
Julius Gillian chapter 1 . 1/6/2008
You're very blunt this far back too, interesting. I guess I see the trend, you keep the same style of poetry with the same typical emotion of bitterness, betrayal, anger, and revenge. It seems these people give you a lot of fuel to write your poetry, where you barely think about it anymore and simply write stuff down about them.

I used to be a fan of linkin park, but I think you're listening to bigger fish than them huh? hehe

However, I stopped listening to them because I realised alot of what I wanted to convey in my poetry and alot of my thoughts day to day didn't always revolve around 'anger'. It's such a strong and warm emotion, it's impulsive if not tamed, and swift when it needs to be. But it doesn't cover every single poem I would like to convey because anger, is just another character to think about.

I guess my point is I'm trying to find something more than just raw anguish in your works. Don't get me wrong, you write wonderfully with it. But habitually writing about the same stuff can make your work look a tad mundane.

Keep it up nonetheless, I'm going to read more.
XxXKristie MarieXxX chapter 1 . 9/4/2007
lol I loved this one! It made me smile and laugh a little. Great work!

Kristie Marie
OfflineForever chapter 1 . 7/20/2007
When you said: "FACT: It wouldn't phase me..." Isn't that last word supposed to be "faze"? I may be wrong, but it just looks right.