Reviews for The Sun and The Moon
Luna's Child chapter 1 . 10/11/2013
Wow, I loved your poem! The symbolism you used was strong; normally, poems about good and evil I find are typically superficial, but this was just perfect. Nice work!
Luna Swanrita Bonita chapter 1 . 12/14/2007
CandleQueen chapter 1 . 8/19/2007
Wow. I like how you represented them in an almost animal-esque way. Awshome. :3

A Sweet Escape chapter 1 . 6/17/2007
You know, I LOVE intense poems, and you put so much feeling into your poems I can feel the intesity in almost every one! I love, love, love, love this one! AMAZING!

Triss chapter 1 . 6/11/2007
Beautiful! u like the concepts of light and dark in your writing and thats very original... i like the concept that light and dark are equal and one can never win.

keep it up

Anjel Kitty chapter 1 . 6/4/2007
I love the poem. It was great. It is true neither light nor dark truely ever win.

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