|Reviews for The Nostalgia Potion|
| oxytocin chapter 1 . 6/14/2007
I can see at once that you are a very skilled writer, and this style actually reminds me of Wilfred Owen - a really amazing use of language. However, this particular poem just didn't speak to me. I think the first stanza needs some caesura - the endless flowing becomes slightly difficult to read. However, that's just my opinion. Well done!