Reviews for Pirates of the Caribbean&Piratas del Caribe de mi
teardropsONroses chapter 2 . 3/8/2010
maybe this would work better if you used the POTC idea, but you had your own characters/plot/conversations.

right now it just seems like the screenplay
J.Dietz chapter 1 . 7/11/2007
I love your story. It flows like a novel. It's beautiful.