Reviews for No More Tomorrows
Kicking Poe chapter 1 . 6/26/2007
incredibly fluid from each line and stanza to the next. beautiful, sensory, gently forceful. cheers.
All Alone With Her Thoughts chapter 1 . 6/13/2007
"Giggles tumble from her/ Mouth as pink watermelon/ Juices run off her chin and/ He licks the stream from/ Her neck and says she’s his"...Creepy.

Great poem, great imagery, all that good stuff.

Sir Scott chapter 1 . 6/6/2007
That was kind of gross picturing someone licking watermelon juice that flowed from someone's mouth. Other than this was a good poem.

forgetwishes chapter 1 . 6/5/2007
Nice job, great use of imagery.
DarkBlysse chapter 1 . 6/5/2007
I loved the ending. It's so sad, but makes me want to root for her, so she does win.