Great job. I will like it. I for one can relate so much to the topic and how someones lies no matter how small innocent can ruin something so special. I like how you filled it with emotion and so got your piont across while keeping the flow.

Mandi~4~life

o you are one a of my favorit authors

Well, you had a good idea, but the format is all over the place, and I think your enter button was broken.. Just clean it up a bit and it will be much easier to read.