|Reviews for Spilt Milk|
| Chidori Nadare chapter 1 . 7/14/2007
That's the truth, maybe there's nothing we can do about it. The only comment I have is that you should have put a comma in the first line. But that's just me, though. Nice haiku.
| a silenced revolution chapter 1 . 6/10/2007
I think we all know that feeling... Good haiku; my only suggestion is that you add punctuation to each line. Good work.
| Basara chapter 1 . 6/8/2007
that's the better idea...
| The Sleepy Poet chapter 1 . 6/5/2007
Very, very philosophical. I like 'em short and quick. The one thing is that some sort of imagery could have been worked in, but the brilliance of this is it's simplicity. So, I would add in a bit of imagery, (showing stuff), and then that would be an excelling poem.
| forgetwishes chapter 1 . 6/5/2007
An excellent haiku, well done.