|Reviews for Eulogies and Post It Notes Can Change the World!|
| everyoneisMISunderstood chapter 1 . 2/24/2011
I can honestly say that you are amazing. This one-shot is amazing.
Jack and Abe's relationship is so real. They get genuinely annoyed with each other, which is great. What's even greater is that they get over it, which to me, is pretty much what love is. Imperfect which is what makes it flawless.
I'm liking the subtle themes you've threaded through-out. It's enough that I noticed, but I don't feel like I'm getting whacked in the face. I really appreciate the lack of face-whacking because that's a huge turn-off.
I don't usually laugh and I don't usually cry when I'm reading. This made me do both. Sometimes at the same time ;)
This made me wishing some guy would leave me Post-It's on my locker. Screw the more traditional ways to fall in love, I'm kinda liking this a lot better. I'm a pretty weird person, so why not a weird way to meet my man? :P
I read this originally about half a year ago. Then I felt back because I KEPT re-reading is and felt the need to leave a nice, long, well-earned review. So I got an account. Just to review this story.
'Course, I'll review other stories, but this was so wonderful I simply had to let you know. I shared with my literature nerd buddies because they should read this.
Y'know, I hope you get published someday and update on your stories letting us know. I'd totally read anything you wrote because you know, you're just THAT awesome.
I also hope that you haven't given up on FictionPress. It's been years since you uploaded anything if I read the dates correctly, and you still have fans, I'm sure. You have at least one of them.
And finally, I hope you go very far in the literary world if that's the career path you've decided to take. You have a serious amount of talent and the ability to influence others with your writing.
Hope I don't seem like too much of a creeper, but I figure, hey, who doesn't like to get their ego fluffed? :)
| Ryhona chapter 1 . 1/24/2011
"For some reason, I felt sort of apprehensive about getting the sticky note on his locker, which was number 642 (memorizing the locker number was always my first order of business)."
...If Jack and Abe'd gone to my school, I'd be six lockers away from him (648). Tee-hee. This was so adorable, it makes my day everytime I read it :D
Couldn't find any mistakes; nice editing.
| samantha chapter 1 . 1/23/2011
this was one of the best stories i have ever read...the plot line was so original
| liv-star chapter 1 . 12/30/2010
So romantic! Sugar and cake abound it's so sweet! I absolutely love the plot around the Post-It notes, and I love how Elizabeth changed her name to Abe. Also, Jack is hot and intelligent. :) (This story reminds me of the Harry Potter fanfic, "Byron", only in terms of mysterious letter senders.) Thanks for writing and posting this!
| PotOfGoldXxx chapter 1 . 12/20/2010
It was so loonng. Seriously. This took me like 20 minutes to read. Adorable though. And Abe is hilarious.
| urtenshii chapter 1 . 11/19/2010
real nice plot there
i love the uniqueness of the story and the humor and wit that it possess...
you're one really talented author..
keep it up ! hoping to read more of your stories soon :)
| hotaru89 chapter 1 . 11/14/2010
:D this made me smile lots, nicely done. I really liked it!
| TasteYourSins chapter 1 . 10/25/2010
I LOVE IT!
I love how he uses 'Elizabeth' rather than Abe because I think it's sexy if guys would rather use your full name. :D And I love the name Elizabeth. :)) And Abe. 'Cuz my friend's name is Aeb.
Anyway...cute cute cute story!
| flunkybubbleshorts chapter 1 . 9/30/2010
I put this one-shot off forEVER! And I am kicking myself really hard in the shins. It is beyond awesome :D
The concept, the execution, the result - flawless!
| Arisu in Wonderland chapter 1 . 9/27/2010
lol, Abe has the same idea as me and my friend, but we decided to go around the school posting the notes on peoples' faces instead, and they were just motivational, not quotes
| KJ's Manuscript chapter 1 . 9/27/2010
You are brilliant, you are! I've never read a story quite like this, and I loved it!
| WishBlade chapter 1 . 9/12/2010
This is at least the 4th time I've read this, and I'm finally reviewing! This is such an inspiring story somehow. I can't figure out specifically how, but I always feel so amazed after reading it. Not to mention that Abe and Jack are adorable together. ]
| Midnight113 chapter 1 . 9/11/2010
That was so cute and creative. I love how she started the post-it notes and then Jack turned it around on her. The last quote was my favorite, it was a perfect ending for them. Very well done!
| Bubbly Girl chapter 1 . 8/31/2010
i FEEL LIKE SOBBING! Don't take this as a bad thing because I always cry during happy endings. :) This one-shot is just so cute and I just love quotes so much that to have a story with so many of them is just wonderful! :) You an amazing job with this one-shot! :)
Peace, Love and Happiness! :)
| dani-sgga chapter 1 . 8/18/2010
Lovely! Just plain lovely...!
This post it idea is wonderful, have you ever tried it for real? Maybe not the stalk-then-post because it is very time consuming but just the general leave-a-nice-message-for-someone-to-find idea. I think I might :)