|Reviews for no running|
| randompoetry chapter 1 . 9/27/2007
ooh, love these clever one liners in there. and the perfect rhyming makes me envious! jealousy...really loved the part about broken hand bones (how creative!)
| lymli chapter 1 . 9/19/2007
the rhyme is cool, I like, my favorite part is "i won't let go
until every last bone in your hand is broken
i won't go home
until every last word in my head is spoken
there is no running from this now (x 2)" the whole song is good.
| Totally-Fuzz chapter 1 . 6/27/2007
wow, punky, lol it sounds sort of revengeful to me, but i like revengeful, not very angry but that's good i like the sense of determination, which you manage to carry throughout the song. More of a one track mindset.