Reviews for Conquer a Cynic |
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![]() ![]() ![]() argh.. i HOPE your not like those great great writers who dont update for months! please! dont be like them! stay away! UPDATING SAVES LIVES - mines atleast, so if you want to keep a person alive and healthy update please! :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() will his parents like her? |
![]() ![]() I'm in love with your story..can't get enuf... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hullo! Imagine my surprise when, upon finishing Chapter 12 of CaC; I clicked on your Favourites to scour for more stories to read and saw my own name there. (: Thanks for supportin Betrothal! Anyway, I have to say I like this one! You started off with a v cliched plot, but added enough unique twists of your own to make it fresh... Kudos to you, heh. Waiting for more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() LOVE IT! UNEXECPTED KISS WAS AWESOME! UPDATE SOON! AND THAT IT WAS ASHLEY'S YOUNGER IS WAS EVEN BETTER! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I just found this on your last update! This wrtiting is divine...those two together just melt my heart...lol. Please give us more soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ooh. Ashley's sister. Interesting. Anyway, see you next chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() YES. victory is mine |
![]() ![]() ![]() coolio. just a sidenote, people stop reading stories, even really good ones like this, if you don't update within 2 weeks. We forget the plot b/c we read so many other good stories. Anywho. i really like this plot. it just seems too easy on elizabeth. it would be a nice ending if at the very end, xavier stopped liking her and then went away to do some "soon-to-be-duke" business. then when they become adults, they meet, but they have different husband/wife now. that would be a very good and realistic ending. keep writing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like it a lot so far, I'll keep reading now. |
![]() ![]() ![]() ..why did he forgive her? that's too unnatural. why does elizabeth always get her way when she acts like a little asshole? other than that, i really like your story. it's beautiful writing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() hahahahahaha. you're like my best friend. obssessed with malfoy...xD |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story! It's very entertaining and unique! Keep up the good work! Update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This has become one of my favorite stories. I really love it, I mean, how can you not? A devilishly handsome Duke-to-be as the lead male role? Yeah, that's what I thought. Please update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() so what did ashley's sister tell her |