Reviews for Conquer a Cynic
cathuman chapter 15 . 10/13/2008

Where is he?

He's supossed to come riding in on his shining white horse with great armor no? Or something around that...

She's not supossed to be able to get on the plane without him being there!

But that is what makes this story so great...the fact that it's not doing what I want it to do. That's why I'm interested.

Keep it up and UPDATE SOON!

awestruck4 chapter 15 . 9/27/2008
You're right. I'm not satisfied with this chapter because it's a simple lack of clear communication between them. I think she should of not hesitated in telling him that of course she did not consider his father's offer and he should have not jumped to conclusions but waited to listen to what she had to say. They've only been together for several months. Even in that time, they can't expect each other to know everything about the other. Nevertheless, I do like the story even if it slightly resembles the movie what a girl wants.
Blood Sinister chapter 7 . 9/22/2008
'snow-shrouded grounds of his English country manor, Chatsworth.'

Ha. Hahahahaha. I wish. I have seen snow a record 4 times in my life, and 1 of those times was around Christmas.

It doesn't snow at Christmas. It rains.

And our national sport would definitely be cricket. Even though everybody likes football way more.

But. You killed Beth. I really liked Beth, she was coolness. And Elizabeth doesn't have any other friends!

Jeez. How unfair. But, it's kind of realistic. Because crap like that does happen in real life, and even though I don't like it, I commend you for doing it.
Nephilim Familiar chapter 15 . 9/17/2008
I just wanted to inform you that I absolutely LOVE your story "Conquer a Cynic" as it is hillarious and intense at the same time. I reached your final chapter (15) thinking it was the last and I almost cried because I wanted more (as I have to admit I am quite a selfish person at times). Therefore I wish you the best of luck on your future updates as I cannot wait for more :)

Sincerely Nephilim Familiar
meiilove chapter 15 . 8/26/2008
why is she leaving!

her and xavier made like the perfect pair!

damn old man...although it is sad he's sick...:(

meiilove chapter 14 . 8/26/2008
hm xavier's dad is such an ass ...
meiilove chapter 13 . 8/26/2008
what a bet :O

and i seriously cant believe ashley O.O
meiilove chapter 11 . 8/26/2008
aw he gave her a necklace :]
meiilove chapter 8 . 8/26/2008
i have an urge to eat ice cream and watch a disney movie now...xD
meiilove chapter 7 . 8/26/2008
omfg! beth died...:'(

im seriously tearing up right now :(
meiilove chapter 5 . 8/26/2008
wow they should seriously work for the police xD
meiilove chapter 4 . 8/26/2008
lol he sort of attacked her with a soccer ball

gave her his shirt and has the car of her dreams :D

this is gonna be so awesome to read! :)
meiilove chapter 3 . 8/26/2008
a deal for info? thats kinda um... weird?

but its pretty cool in a twisted sort of way .
meiilove chapter 2 . 8/26/2008
omg! i cant believe he hit her...but at least she ends up finding out it was him xD
meiilove chapter 1 . 8/26/2008
this is going to soo fun to read :)
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