Reviews for Conquer a Cynic
emotionless-stares chapter 5 . 7/2/2008
Wow, these guys sure are good. He really wants her huh?
emotionless-stares chapter 4 . 7/2/2008
Oh wow, she found true love already huh lol. Anyway, he was JEALOUS! Awesome.
emotionless-stares chapter 3 . 7/2/2008
Kidnap her eh?
emotionless-stares chapter 2 . 7/2/2008
Lol omg. She got run over. Anyway, I don't think he should have said that he was the one that ran her over lol. She hates him even more.
serendipity90 chapter 15 . 7/2/2008
that is soo mean of the old man! i hope u update soon its soo interesting
emotionless-stares chapter 1 . 7/2/2008
Can't wait to see the new kid lol.
Jevanminx chapter 15 . 7/2/2008
Aw no, she cant leave damn it, what is she thinking.

JM
039301 chapter 15 . 7/2/2008
That was so sad. I am close to crying. But please update soon. I'm dying for the next chapter.
Lady of Confusion chapter 15 . 7/2/2008
Do you know it is very tempting to take Xavier's father's head and slam it into a brink wall?...stupid...idoit...UPDATE ASAP!
hopelessromantic444 chapter 15 . 7/2/2008
poor elizabeth! (
crazylady4 chapter 15 . 7/2/2008
i really liked this chaoter please update soon!
ARose'sTear chapter 14 . 6/23/2008
PLEASE write MORE! I LOVE THIS STORY!
sarah chapter 14 . 6/21/2008
omg omg omg.

i just started reading yesterday and i finshed up till the latest chapter 2day and omg

awesome story pur-lease update like right now lol

AHH i love it!

suspensful much!

UPDATE!
cathuman chapter 10 . 6/2/2008
Wow! Two reviews in one night. This must be a special story.

So...just wondering. Have you been served yet? Lawsuits? People bringing you to court for the undeniably dangerous reaction to this story? I stopped breathing.

If I had died...it would be this story's fault. So there.

XD I'm kidding about the lawsuit thing. But the breathtaking-ness? Very much there.

With much respect

nfused
cathuman chapter 7 . 6/2/2008
This chapter. Wow. I just today started reading your story. It's been a while since one has completely captured me and pulled me in. There have only been three stories (on Fictionpress) that have made me cry. And this is one of them.

You wrote it perfectly. And I know that sounds a little...strange, but you completely and totally captured everything. The emotion, how fast it happened, and the shock that set in afterwards.

I'm crying...this is weird. It's been a while.

What made me cry most was the dedication at the end. My reaction was "Oh my God," and then I was bawling.

You are amazing. And I'm very sorry for the loss of your friend. I hope that you, yourself, are doing well, and I know from experience that it hurts...a lot. Good for you for doing so.

I must keep reading before I suffer Xavier withdrawls.

With much respect,

nfused
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