|Reviews for spoiled|
| instant bliss chapter 1 . 6/6/2007
Great poem. Loved the formatting, especially in "it’s always (so complicated for us)".
| Ashelin chapter 1 . 6/6/2007
I really liked this. It depicted wonderful emotions, and the last line was so perfect. Throughout the questioning there is always that defining feeling. It was very good. Great job.