|Reviews for Everyone Lies|
| Setsuna529 chapter 1 . 6/15/2008
I love the flow, the words just keeping tumbling along... the line breaks seem at first to be in unnatural places and yet it works very well. I feel like I can empathize with a lot of this.
| All Alone With Her Thoughts chapter 1 . 6/13/2007
Another one I could relate to! Really, really powerful.
Really great stuff.
| Definition chapter 1 . 6/9/2007
I especially loved the third paragraph - "Be bodies drenched in the moonlight our skin our mirrors and instead of two there's one or millions..."
You're on my fav. authors list :)
| she smolders chapter 1 . 6/7/2007
I really do hate lying but what I hate even more is that the lies slip off my tongue so easily nowadays, that even I can't tell when I tell the truth. Know this though, I've never lied to you and think your writing is amazing. Just be true to yourself and find something/someone that can help you stay strong.
| DarkBlysse chapter 1 . 6/7/2007
"I don’t want to be beautiful and
- Lovely alliteration, and a beautiful sentiment.
The second stanza (the start of it) was definitely my favorite part.
| SirScott chapter 1 . 6/6/2007
This poem flowed really well.
| mizu no kokoro chapter 1 . 6/6/2007
i like the last two lines. very true, yet no one ever thinks of it. overall well written.
| Tytherpol chapter 1 . 6/6/2007
this is just so good.
i really like it.