Reviews for Everyone Lies
Setsuna529 chapter 1 . 6/15/2008
I love the flow, the words just keeping tumbling along... the line breaks seem at first to be in unnatural places and yet it works very well. I feel like I can empathize with a lot of this.
All Alone With Her Thoughts chapter 1 . 6/13/2007
Another one I could relate to! Really, really powerful.

Really great stuff.

Rowan.
Definition chapter 1 . 6/9/2007
Just Wow.

I especially loved the third paragraph - "Be bodies drenched in the moonlight our skin our mirrors and instead of two there's one or millions..."

You're on my fav. authors list :)
she smolders chapter 1 . 6/7/2007
I really do hate lying but what I hate even more is that the lies slip off my tongue so easily nowadays, that even I can't tell when I tell the truth. Know this though, I've never lied to you and think your writing is amazing. Just be true to yourself and find something/someone that can help you stay strong.
DarkBlysse chapter 1 . 6/7/2007
"I don’t want to be beautiful and

Broken anymore..."

- Lovely alliteration, and a beautiful sentiment.

The second stanza (the start of it) was definitely my favorite part.
SirScott chapter 1 . 6/6/2007
This poem flowed really well.

SirScott
mizu no kokoro chapter 1 . 6/6/2007
i like the last two lines. very true, yet no one ever thinks of it. overall well written.

keep writing
Tytherpol chapter 1 . 6/6/2007
this is just so good.

i really like it.