|Reviews for Love Sold Love Away|
| Ashelin chapter 1 . 6/6/2007
The first three lines were so beautiful. The rest of it was wonderful too, they were just amazingly wonderful. I have a soft spot for beginnings and endings though. The only problems I saw is "bath" should have been "bathe". I make mistakse like that all the time though. That was a wonderful last line too. Great job.