Reviews for Madeline
Ashelin chapter 1 . 6/6/2007
Some of this was a little confusing, but the ending was just heartbreaking.

"Occasionally mouthing her thoughts silently

Her lips would twitch just slightly

Just like a scratched CD plays in your ears

Tears welling up in the corners of her eyes"

That was my favorite part of the whole thing. I loved description langauge though, images created from words. It was very lovely. I also liked the emotions you portrayed. You did a good job. Keep it up.