Reviews for Seven Levels of Hate
Trillpuv chapter 1 . 3/31/2013
This hits me right in the feels.
Campione chapter 1 . 10/25/2009
It might be a little late, but i always think you should let the author know, no matter how late that you really like what you read :). There are few pieces of writing that can make someone cry and I did cry in the end. Good job. Keep writing.
RYTEREWQ chapter 1 . 10/25/2008
The ending was like a punch in the gut.

It made me cry.

Wonderfully written piece. You took your time fleshing out your characters, and the pacing was perfect.

I enjoyed reading this. (:
october lies chapter 1 . 9/3/2008
oh my god, there are no words to express how amazing this is. i absolutely love the recurring "i hate you" and being carried. this is amazing.
PindrakeCake chapter 1 . 4/22/2008
I thought that was such a totally lovely story.

but no offense, your authors note kind of ruined it.

I fucking hate when authors diss their work.

You put it up and it's GOOD. don't try to make excuses man, and take that authors not down in case you ruin such a good story for anyone else.
creepy kiss on tuesday chapter 1 . 12/10/2007
i like the idea of this, it kind of feels familiar though. i think it would be better if you specified how he died. i dunno. it was good though. my heart sank on the last one.
Oracle of Destiny chapter 1 . 11/7/2007
Wow,this is really touching and I felt sorry for both the boys in the end.
Twilight Starr chapter 1 . 11/5/2007
Great story. It's sad, but terrific.

~Twilight Starr~
His Mercy's Waiting chapter 1 . 10/8/2007
This started off as a poem? Yes, I can imagine how long that would be. :)

Good job on your first one-shot!

Keep writing.
Professional Dreamer chapter 1 . 6/17/2007
You may think it's messy and the ending is lame...but I love it. You have made me cry. Lots in fact :') damn you. I may have to add you to my favourite authors just for this.
Forever Forbidden chapter 1 . 6/14/2007
Wow, I don't know what you are talking about. It's totally sad but oddly reverberating, and all those friendship moments are quite something.

Great story.
Sundown chapter 1 . 6/8/2007
This is an excellent one-shot and you shouldn't think otherwise. It's powerful without being incredibly angsty, or tear-jerky, or depressing...I mean it's sad, true, but it doesn't have all the frilly little parts usually added to TRY to make people sad (I hope that made sense...I'm writing this during essay procrastination). I liked the bond between the two sister is six years my senior, and I drew many similarities to us in the early age sections of the character. Great piece, well written, interesting concept. Well done.
preppy puppy chapter 1 . 6/8/2007
i love it sarcasm's slave (i don't know if i am supposed to use your real name). i like how it skipped around, it was life, or part of one, flashing before your eyes and you had to make it worth watching or whatever. yay!
glimpses from an ivory tower chapter 1 . 6/7/2007
You know, normally I avoid reading prose on fictionpress. I'm a poetry sort of girl...if I want fiction, I go to Barnes and Noble.

This piece, though, it really intrigued me...I love the motif of "I hate you" and the close relationship between the older and younger brother. It works well as a one-shot, but I can also see it as part of a larger story-that's partly my desire to know more about the characters. Like why the older brother died at 19 (five years difference, right?), and whether the two of them had any other siblings.

Wonderful work, and I look forward to reading more.
ChildeOfChaos chapter 1 . 6/7/2007
I really don't know what you're talking about cause I loved this. It was so sad and! I really thought it was amazing.
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