Reviews for The Bet
nevershoutkait13 chapter 51 . 3/16/2014
I am in love with this story and I am sad it's over ... No doubt I will read this again and again. I was honestly thinking Dani would end up with Ash ... I would have been pissed because I was rooting for Tristain since day one! I love it and you really took me on an emotional rollercoaster... I'm gonna go stare at the wall until I figure out what to do with my life from here.
Guest chapter 44 . 10/16/2013
Mmk just so you know, I am almost done and if she doesn't end up with Ash, I am going to pull my hair out. It is hard enough keeping up with this girl's love life. Team Ash!
Weird Anon chapter 51 . 7/28/2013
Hello :D I honestly think your story is very original! I'm going to seriously try hard and be like Danielle xD So, here comes the blow. When I read the story I got a little confused at some parts, some bits weren't clear to me. Actually, I'm blaming myself because I probably didn't bother to read intently. MY FAULT. I enjoyed it though :)) I really appreciate all those writers who actually finish their stories. THEY ARE AMAZING. Thanks :3 I hope you do well and I'm planning to read your story properly! Promise. Bye bye!
AnonymousReads chapter 51 . 11/1/2012
I liked ash better. Great story. :)
Aradia Cloud chapter 4 . 7/26/2011
I'm sorry. But her attitude is just TOO disgusting for my tastes.
rubberduckysabc chapter 35 . 5/7/2011
Is the oneshot Everything still up?
books-o-worm chapter 51 . 12/26/2010
woow ! it was a really beautiful story... i love it.

witeaya chapter 50 . 10/22/2010
dani's life was so full of drama it's not even , i think it helps that she is quite the over dramatic character.

i love the originality of the plot.u sure know how to make twists in ur story. until the second last chapter i still cant figure out who will dani end up with.

and oh, how i love each male character. yes, even richard cause i freaking love how u introduce him at the beginning. he sounded so witty.

to put it in a nutshell, im in love with this story!
Altschul chapter 2 . 4/2/2010
OMG NO WAY PONY!... I love da story you rok kid!
ahappytune chapter 37 . 12/18/2009
OMG i always play the alphabet game on car trips :D a popular phrase after the game is over - "you may have won, but we have the moral high ground" gotta love family. anyhoo, the story is really good, but then again, i wouldnt be reading it if it wasnt :)
Lucid Lune in Acoustic chapter 14 . 11/29/2009
As for this chapter & the entire story in general, I have two questions.

1. Does Danielle know how to keep her buisness hers at all? Not saying that it should be some Dirty Little Secret, but half the people that think she is easy, would not think so if she did not tell the entire world who she has opened her legs for. It's really, unattractive? I don't know.

2. Do these girls have respect for themselves? All this hooking up, it's...nasty. Guess it's believeable, but that fact in itself is disturbing, lol. Does make me chuckle a bit though. I plan to finish it out.
Lucid Lune in Acoustic chapter 13 . 11/29/2009
Reminder: Write everyday! Don't know if this is pointless or not, seeing as you have already written a [knd-a, sort-a] sequel to this, lmao! But here it is anyways, yeah. (In my mind that was written with a British accent - Just so you know)


Lucid Lune in Acoustic chapter 9 . 11/28/2009
I adore Wheat Thins, now I really want some. Too bad it's 6:14am and I have yet to sleep. Halfway through this chapter I realized something: Danielle is really rude. I mean, it wasn't a realization, more like a confirmation. Yes. Up until I mived to this tiny town I live in I would never have thought that young people actually behaved that way. Because that's never been my bag, but I get it now. Sort of. The kids here are horrible - as far as attitudes go, lol. So she's in character on that front. There are quite a few guys in this story...just bunches. Love that song by Boys Like Girls, I kind of like their new album. That song with them & Taylor Swift and there's another called Go, which I love. I do not know why I'm rambling on about That, Here.

Liking it so far,

Downtown Detours chapter 50 . 10/16/2009
This was an amazing story. I spent 15 hours or so reading it straight through.

It was so realistic that at one point after reading it, I actually thought it was real for a few seconds. Lame, I know.

The characters are so easy to love and the drama pisses you off and makes you live it but at the same time it excites you and then makes you glad Dani can stand up for herself.

The only thing I didn't like, was Tristain. He was an alright guy but he just bothered me for some reason. She really seemed like she was in love with Ash, just in denial about it so I wanted her with him in the end. I'm also glad she became somewhat friends with Mark too. He actually seemed cool when not being an ass.

After finishing this, I realized how I hate that in real life, when a guy sleeps with 10 girls in 2 weeks he's seen as awesome. But when a girl sleeps with 6 guys in the span of 4 years, she's seen as a slut. Though Dani did end up drunk and in bed with random people twice, she wasn't really that bad in reality. She just had a ton of friends with benefits. No one seemed to havea problem with it except all the people who weren't getting laid ha.

Glad I read this. :)
kay chapter 43 . 9/13/2009
i just was curious about the day brian died she didnt go to visit his grave or anything and i really dont get it i mean i only read to ch.43 but it still didnt come when is it gna come juss curious sorry
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