Reviews for The Bet
WriterGurl123 chapter 40 . 9/21/2008
Oh! Even more drama! I love it! I'm a bit pissed that Tristan failed at his whole deal, I really wanted them to be together, but like I've always said Dani and Ash are meant to be.

I wonder why her dad is there though, it seems very strange.

Love it!
Alennia Midnight chapter 39 . 9/16/2008
Coll story. Update soon.
DawnAwakens chapter 39 . 8/27/2008
I just started reading this story. And I absolultey fell in love with it.. it's like so addictingg! I don't understand how you came up with all the drama, and how someone could possibly have so much drama in their life haha. I like Tristain, but if Ash is starting to like Dani... then I'm definitely rooting for Ash. But it doesn't relaly matter, as long as it makes the story amazing, im up for it ) You've got great writting skills and UPDATE SOON!
ShootingStarsAren'tMagical chapter 39 . 8/26/2008
So i've left you other reviews that i didn't sign in for, cause i'm lazy, but if you don't update soon i'll die. and then my friends will avenge my death by murdering you. and i would assume someone would come after them and i really don't want anyone to die. so update soon and we'll all save money cause there will be no grave stones to buy!




MCakaWriterGirl chapter 39 . 8/26/2008
omg omg he's awake you should have made them sleep with each other cam and dani for old time sakes. please update soon. can't wait for the next chapter.
xxCRAZY DOMINICANxx chapter 39 . 8/25/2008
OMG! I almost cried when I saw those two words at the end of the chapter... I loved it Write more! I love this story
amanda chapter 10 . 8/25/2008

i like it. alot.

except the first time i read Brian's name i closed the internet window and screamed a little.

but either way.

its good. i like it.
MeAndYou8542 chapter 39 . 8/25/2008
AGH! He's awake XD XD XD hahah now I know why you wouldn't tell me the last words :P

anyways, it was very good :) can't wait for the next chapter.
kingrankar76 chapter 39 . 8/25/2008
Yay. Ash is awake. I love him. Though Dani has gotta be more faithful. I think right now my favourite boy is Cam. He's such a bad ass you can't help but to love him. Please update soon.
WriterGurl123 chapter 39 . 8/25/2008
Loved this chapter! I'm so glad that Ash is finally awake, but I wish that her and Tristan could just go back to being the way they were before she made out with Cam. I can see why he's upset about it though, and it has something to do with why he hates Cam...maybe he'll tell her about it.

Love it!
amanda chapter 3 . 8/25/2008

i like the plot line.

and since the first chapter your writing style is much more fluid. so i'm happy.

buut you made me want some triscuits.

and i don't have any.

so i'm sad. haha.

i'm really curious to know the backstory of cheerleading, drunk driving, and Lee. but i know i'll have to wait.


can't wait to read the rest.
futureauthor852 chapter 39 . 8/25/2008
Oh my, I loved it! He's awake, awake, awake! Please update soon! ~Angela~
Maria Gracia chapter 38 . 8/16/2008
I dont think I cant tell you enough how much I LOVE this story... Its fucking amazing... It makes my day.. The way its narrated, and the plot is awesome and beliavable... and true... It shows the other side of things and not what people think its right... because most of the time the things are not what they seem to be nor are... and not always the right thing to do is good... You know what I mean dont you?

I fucking love the Ash-Dani dinamic... doubt I see them as friends... and Tristain... won my heart since day one... :D

Bittersweet Farwell chapter 38 . 8/14/2008
Only a few things I saw in this chapter. You didn't hit a key correctly and forgota letter in a couple of your word, but that's it, no real grave errors. All in all this was a good chappie. Update soon Please!

princessbig232 chapter 1 . 8/14/2008
I just read the first paragraph of your book...

How did chuck manage to be ten years older than (? I haven't seen a name yet)who is 17, but have a son thats a month older. That would make chuck 27 meaning that he had his son at the age of 10. :) something is a bit Hinky!


I will add another review when I have read more and I guarantee it will not be like this one :)

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