Reviews for The Bet
Lucid Lune in Acoustic chapter 2 . 9/12/2009
Love, LOVE, -LOVE- it! If I could emphacize that last "love" any more than I already have, I would. But I can not and I love this story, seriously. I should be cleaning my room right now and I am not, so, that say something.

I have ALWAYS wanted a pony. Horse now, but whatever!
Lucid Lune in Acoustic chapter 1 . 9/12/2009
Well i thought it was fabulous - I don't think that sums it up well, but whatever. I liked it, point blank. Danielle is awesome...I always make sure people aren't too drunk to drive when they leave my house after any night where alcohol is involved, so that's cool. I love the boys, kinda hate her sister, lol, sadly. But this is only the first chapter, people can change, I hope _
rubberduckysabc chapter 51 . 8/5/2009
So far this is still my favorite story from this whole website :) I read it a year ago and i was so good that i had to read it again. :D
onlyuptosaveit chapter 51 . 7/27/2009
aw that was cute but...

I was kinda hoping she'd end up with Ash

oh well it was still really really cute :]
xWei chapter 51 . 7/7/2009
Awwe - I'd hoped that Dani would end up with Ash. [ Ah wells, Tristain is awesome too! I quite liked this story. Unlike others of this length, I didn't get bored to death halfway through. Keep writing ]
lissalee chapter 50 . 6/23/2009
i honestly dont know why you haven't got more reviews from this story! i read it all yesterday and today. it was quite ingenius how you kept adding in new characters and giving them all different background and how they all somehow knew eachother.

brilliant :)
paulina C chapter 1 . 6/22/2009
i loved this story! i think u said before it was ur first story and it was very good... so anyways i was wondering wat happened to the story everything u said u wrote?

i dont have an account but if u could just comment back on ur page that would be great if not the ill just keep looking to see if its there... so anyways awesome story!
xoxo anne chapter 50 . 6/14/2009


I thought she was gonna end up with Ash.


Part of me thought she would end up with Tristain too. O_e


Somewhere... deep down...

I wish her and Ash would've ended up together.


But it's all good that her and Tristain ended up together.


Girl of Light Writer chapter 41 . 6/11/2009
Wow, everyone once again wants a piece of Dani. Ash and Dani... that would be amazing. He's the only one who is always there and cares for her, not ever hurting her. Yea Dani and Ash! Great last few chapters. I love this story.
Girl of Light Writer chapter 37 . 6/11/2009
Everyone wants a piece of Dani- some in a good way and others and a bad and Ash and Dani are on bad terms again... sigh.
Girl of Light Writer chapter 33 . 6/10/2009
It's awesome. I'm really enjoying. It's funny to see them interacting like this especially after they weren't talking for so long... I miss Ash though.
Girl of Light Writer chapter 29 . 6/10/2009
Yea! Ash and Dani. I thought Sam was a good person but she had us all fooled.
Girl of Light Writer chapter 28 . 6/10/2009
I couldn't believe Richard did that. He's an idiot and he deserves what he got. I would do the same, or have my friends. She's back with Ash, I feel so bad about his leg.
Girl of Light Writer chapter 25 . 6/10/2009
I prefer Tristen, Richard is just annoying me. I think he cares too much about other guys and is paranoid but I kinda can't blame him but he's over the top. Guys like that are so annoying.
Girl of Light Writer chapter 23 . 6/10/2009
That's a hillarious joke. I can only imagine that contraption lol.
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