Reviews for The Bet
Girl of Light Writer chapter 22 . 6/10/2009
Ash is so awesome. That's how guys should be... protecting and caring. Lee didn't do that bad himself though. Good to know that she can pick pretty good guys.
Girl of Light Writer chapter 20 . 6/10/2009
Yeah! Ash and Dani are friends again. It's crazy what's going on with Lee and Kara though.

I love this story so much. I'm really enjoying reading this. I've hardly put it down since I started reading.
Girl of Light Writer chapter 17 . 6/10/2009
What? Lee, again. She didn't learn her lesson the first time? No... pick Ash.
animegirl214 chapter 50 . 6/4/2009
u like. totally saved me with this story. :D it was awesome and very dramatic. (which means i loved it. XD)

thanks for the wonderful story and saving my butt. :]

keep on writing more awesome and wonderful stuff! thank you! XD
Desiree chapter 1 . 6/3/2009
I think it's the 5th paragraph it says "The my mom..." It should be a "Then, my mom..." You forgot both the 'n' and the comma.

Just thought you might want a heads up.

I edit things as I read them, my apologies if it was disappointing.
SparklingStar25 chapter 50 . 6/2/2009
that was a really good story..liked it a lt! :)
deathanddawn chapter 11 . 5/31/2009
ohh cooll!

i got it now. soz but i wasnt thinking earlier (;

this is a really good story!

thanks for writing it!

deathanddawn chapter 6 . 5/31/2009
Hi! This is such a good story.

But there's one problem...

I'm slightly confused. Weren't Lee and Dani underage to get married? And she was pregnent? Could you please explain.

It's still a great story P

blubbfreak chapter 51 . 5/29/2009
Hey, I just finished reading this story and I really like it. I have to say, that during the first three or four chapters I thought about stopping reading because I didn't like your way of writing, but since it got a whole lot better in the following chapters I stuck with it and am really happy about that.

Thanks again for sharing this story with us.

blonski chapter 1 . 5/28/2009
Very interesting! I like how it started with a bang, but i want more description about Danielle. I'm glad she's the level headed one. Great job!

BoxedxxxInnocence chapter 16 . 5/27/2009
"Love this story, it actually got me into fits of giggles and hysterics, I couldn't stop laughing for ages. You should really publish it. Love you, bye XD" - from my sister. I love your story too - it's completely crazy. Have you read Dear Imagination by LolyDarko? I think you'd like it, it's a similar type of dry, emotionless humour.
Cotton Ball chapter 2 . 5/25/2009
You know... both chapter two and three start with "before I knew it, it was wednesday"...

I'm wondering... is it the next wednesday?

Any ways.. I think I started to read this and then I stoped... but I'm not sure why. .

Just thought I'd tell yout that I was confused because of the wednesday thing.

3DarkGoddess3 chapter 50 . 5/23/2009
Wow its finally over. This was one of the first stories I read on fiction press. I really like this story and all of the characters in it. Ash is probly my favorite. Its cool that her and Tristan worked out. I didn't have a clue who she might end up with in the end but I kinda hoped for Ash cuz he loved her no matter what. Just wondering if you plan on writing about any of the characters from this story?
abbsi chapter 50 . 5/23/2009
Hello, I loved your story. Your writing drew me in and I became captivated by the characters. I love how you didn't make anyone perfect, but you also didn't make anyone too complete of a jerk, just all human. This helped the characters to really come to life.

I also love how you also did not make all of Danielle's relationships out to be obvious place holders for her to get jerked around while waiting for her and Tristan to get together. One of my few pet peeves with many stories is the making the heroine fall in love with one guy for some huge long time, while the author makes it insanely clear that she won't end up with him, then he does something stupid, so she can become free for the actual romantic lead.

I also loved the ending, b/c I know how difficult they can be, and I really respect you for tying up the ends, and still come up with an awesome ending line that doesn't feel like you just stopped writing. :)

So most of all, thank you for an enjoyable read. And I hope to read more of your work in the future. :)
xoxhp chapter 50 . 5/23/2009
Omg! IT's finally done! THIS WAS AMAZING GI LOVED IT

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