Reviews for The Bet
smileinthemira chapter 50 . 5/22/2009
awee, its over, no i will miss it. any chance at a sequel?
helzyeah chapter 50 . 5/22/2009
its finished? it doesnt really sound finished. are you gunna put an epilogue or sequel up?

i love this story so much and congrats on finnaly finishing it.
ShineLikeAStar chapter 50 . 5/21/2009
This was a pretty good ending, even though I really wanted her to end up with Ash. It seemed like the story didn't really focus on her and Tristian much, but focused on her and Cam and Ash and Lee more. But anyways, I still love it and this will FOREVER be my FAVORITE story on fictionpress. Are you planning on writing any more stories in the future?
poopstik chapter 50 . 5/21/2009
This story had a reaaly good ending to it. Will you be writing a sqeuel?
kuririncute222 chapter 50 . 5/21/2009
T - T sad that its over but loved it! hope to see more of ur stories in the future!
xoxo1 chapter 50 . 5/21/2009
wait, so that's it! the story is over?

i thought she was going to end up with ash! NO!

not that i don't love the ending or anything, but i was more of a dan-ash fan.

but aww, they're going to get married :)

loved the story, it was amazing :]]

XxButterflyxAngelxBabygirl chapter 50 . 5/21/2009
awesome ending! are you going to write a sequel? loved the story!
Teenage Solitude chapter 50 . 5/21/2009
Great ending! I love this story
Priscilla Shay chapter 50 . 5/21/2009

Okay, you know I love your story and in case you don't "I love your story" :)

And I definately like that they got their happy ending...but it seems incomplete. Are you doing a epilogue or is this is? Because I don't know what happened to the others. From the last chapter I assume Ash beat the hell out of Cam, but we don't know what happens to them after that. Or what about Trent? Did Henry and Rebecca accept him? What happened to Bradley and Lee? And what did Dani decide to major in?

And there are typos in this and the previous chapter, but they're minor.'t hate me :( Sorry, I just had a couple of questions lol.

Remember! I love the story!

CherryCokeZero chapter 28 . 5/13/2009
ok so i skipped school today and was reading this from like eight in the AM. Still not done and im gonna keep going because this is no doubt top 5 of every story i've ever read, including books. I ignored the 5 updates i've gotten today and cannot wait to catch up and for the next update even though thats kinda a contradiction but whatever. I LOVE Dani's attitude and seriously wish i was like her haha.
xoxhp chapter 48 . 4/30/2009
Very well done! I missed this story. It had been awhile since oyu updated :) You know, as much as I love her she really needs to stop sleeping with Cam. Idk why but he pisses me off lol. Can't wait for the next chapptaah.
XxButterflyxAngelxBabygirl chapter 48 . 4/29/2009
awesome chapter! loved it! wonder how Tristain knew about the race. wonder what will happen to Dani now. hope you can continue again soon!
Priscilla Shay chapter 48 . 4/29/2009

Omg, comepletely happy you updated! YAY!

But, um before I think you mentioned that this might be your last or second to last chapter. But, it kinda seems like the story is starting up again, with her moving back to Central and what not.

And...I don't know why, I know you had Ash adamantly deny it, but I still think something's up with how he's behaving. Marie, Sam, his grades, randomly disappearing. Like, where did he go when she woke up in his bed with Swing, Swing on repeat?

Lol, I don't know if it was on purpose, but I am asking so...i'm curious and I was paying attention! Lol.

Now, this one's really bothering me: Why was Tristain even there? And where did he go? How come he left without a fight? And that really was a lame excuse. I know something's definately up with how Bradley and Chris were acting so I'm not gonna ask about that one and I'll just wait until the next I wonder what it is...

Lol, and I love how Cam is sleeping with her again and Megan's been MIA since the "study" day.

Awesomeness, Love your characters, dialogue and plot! :)



I'm trying to prepare for my english class right if I fail it's because I was reading the chapter lol.

helzyeah chapter 48 . 4/29/2009
i love this story. i dont see why you dont have more reviews its brilliant!

keep updating

ShineLikeAStar chapter 48 . 4/29/2009
I literally freaked out when I saw that you had updated! This was a great chapter, and I can't wait to read the next one! I love this story so much.
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