Reviews for Breathtakingly Gorgeous
Half-Blood Metamorphmagus chapter 1 . 8/25/2009

This One Shot was probably one of the BESTS I've ever read! D

I loved the plot, the writing... Hell! Even the stupidity in the whole arguing between Ryan and Kaia. xD

You should keep it up, seriously. You rock and roll and kick everyone's ass. :)

Keep up the good work and don't stop writing! D
Chloeee chapter 1 . 8/24/2009
Aw that was so cute, I LOVED IT xD
Heather1234 chapter 1 . 8/23/2009
okay so i no you posted this i think like a while ago but i jsut read it and AW

this is really super duper cute xD bahahah

i really really like your stories/one shots.

tall chapter 1 . 8/22/2009
I am dying. Of this story's brilliance )

Lamest review ever but, eh.
mistariapotter chapter 1 . 8/17/2009
this is cheesiness to the max XD
Sweet-Cakesz24 chapter 1 . 7/28/2009
aww this was the cutest oneshot i've ever read! I'm so happy for them. D
wind's aria chapter 1 . 7/20/2009
I keep forgetting to review for this story, but this has to be one of my favorite one shots on FP, and it's definitely my favorite story by you.

I just love how Kaia and Ryan interact. You made Kaia so real and so relatable to just about anyone. And Ryan, I love how you wrote Ryan. He is such a typical guy, someone you'd want to punch one moment and kiss the next (and that, folks, is definitely how guys are.) And I love the whole confession scene. I loved how you kept up the humor all throughout, it kept the story from being overly fluffy. Not that there's anything wrong with fluff, but the whole scene was all the more real for the seesaw of emotions that you put Ryan through.

I love how distinct their personalities are. And I absolutely love your title and how you used it in the story.
Ivix chapter 1 . 7/19/2009
cute )
handsintheair chapter 1 . 7/17/2009
you write the best oneshots! :D
SmearedRedTearDrops chapter 1 . 7/14/2009
BAHAHA! This was hilarious :P
AmeliaRivers chapter 1 . 7/9/2009
This was the cutest and most adorable story I have read in sometime. At the end I was like aw. I just love it .
P.F Ally chapter 1 . 7/8/2009
I want a Ryan! D:

LOL. I've said I want a Jesse (from Vena Cava's Heart Lotion SPF 20), and I want a Rafe (from JD Allen's Ordinary World). XD
Faithfully Yours chapter 1 . 7/6/2009
I hereby declare this adorable. ) Seriously. I like them. I want to know what happens a few years down the road though... Do they live happily ever after?
anonymous chapter 1 . 6/27/2009
Oops! im sorry the previous post was not directed at you but at the person that stole your story i clicked on the wrong page my bad, anyway this is a heads up that someone over at fanfiction stole your story named it 'tongue tied'(under twilight ff) so you'll know i already reported such person and once again im sorry by my previous post it was not directed at you but at the person that stole your story i simply clicked on the wrong page i was comparing the two stories after the other seemed really familiar and it suprised me to see the same story almost exactly i hope that the person that stole your story gets punished
anonymous chapter 1 . 6/27/2009
I think it is very uncool that you stole a story written by somebody else, just wanted to tell you that I reported you because it's not right that you just decided to take something you didn't write
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