Reviews for Breathtakingly Gorgeous
R.F.Y chapter 1 . 6/11/2007
i absolutely loved kaia's personality! you made this one shot very humorous and a bit cliched, and its fantastic.

wh00t chapter 1 . 6/11/2007
omgosh love it!
Lavi R chapter 1 . 6/11/2007

this is so cute!

i love your work, i most of your work but this is my first time reviewing!

good work!

Azrael Adamine Gaunt chapter 1 . 6/11/2007
I love it. Sweet and realistic. Keep Writing!
Susurrent Threnody chapter 1 . 6/11/2007
You just made my day and brought a smile to my face, thank you.
JemKay chapter 1 . 6/10/2007
cool story
AliSun Free chapter 1 . 6/10/2007
Oh ehm Gee. That was so cute. Now that. made me smile :)
Pinkamoo chapter 1 . 6/9/2007
Aww thats so sweet! I love it, brilliant!
authordream4life chapter 1 . 6/9/2007
Love it! keep up the great work! very entertaining!

-sa x33
flojo22811 chapter 1 . 6/9/2007
britty-tt chapter 1 . 6/9/2007
Who could get sick of one shots when they are written with this much skill?

This story is 'breathtakingly good'.

I love it. I'm a sucker for the "i've loved you for years' stories and I love one shots because they show more emotion in one chapter than whole stories can.

This was such a sweet story but also had hints of humour that made it that much better. Its heaps good!
ess3sandra chapter 1 . 6/9/2007
this is lovely, romantic as hell. we all need a tad of that!
A.K.A. Writer's Block chapter 1 . 6/8/2007
oh my god love
MKSub chapter 1 . 6/8/2007
"You’d probably hurt me for suggesting that to now else now. . .”- um... "now else now" doesn't make any sense.

"He’s always have"- i think you meant "He always has"

This story was really cute.
candii-apple chapter 1 . 6/8/2007
THAT WAS SO SWEET! loved it to bits )
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