The imagery is lovely. Its a thought provoking piece and very intriguing. When I first read it, I thought about a really old person reaching out for something just out of his grasp. I don't know where that came from. X) Great work, as always.

WOW. So much story and depth and intrigue purely by leaving it all out. :) That is genius.

i won't. :)

i do like its rythm, even if i don't quite get the subject matter.

Intriguing... I like it.