|Reviews for Broken Girl|
| the truth beneath the rose chapter 1 . 6/10/2007
I have to admit, I don't quite like this as much as "Pink Hearts" or "Tranquility". Probably because I'm not in such a angsty mood! :0 Well, all in all it's rather...pretty. & sad. Really. I just got the ending! That's so eerie man, I didn't realize it was written in black blood like wowzers...
Kay, well. I'll stop babbling now. :p
| Ashelin chapter 1 . 6/9/2007
I relate so much to this. But it gets better, I promise. I adored this. Lovely haiku. You're really good at these!
| a silenced revolution chapter 1 . 6/8/2007
Simple and effective. Nice work.
| Rapture Whispers chapter 1 . 6/7/2007
the words "black blood" just totally sucked me in. And then...oh, it's gorgeous. Lol, I know it's just three lines but those are some awesome three lines. Love how u put the words "I hate you" in bold. I love the entire thing.
| tearing hands chapter 1 . 6/7/2007
I love the image of "black blood", but the last line seems almost as if it could be a little more powerful.
But don't listen to me, I don't know a single thing about haikus. Except the whole 5-7-5 thing.