Reviews for Even I cry
Wylloa chapter 1 . 6/15/2007
These lyrics... have got to be my favorite work of yours. You can taste the sorrow and see the tears. I loved the Chorous... and the first four lines really reeled you in. Amazing.
L. Sherman chapter 1 . 6/7/2007
Hey, nice job surprising me. I went for a walk and ended up at the library for a quick little glance at my mail. I just finished a mail to KyoHana and found this sitting in my inbox. So I just HAD to read it.

Three words: I LOVE it.

Especially the lines, "Even I fall upon my knees in despair/Even I scream to the sky it's not fair." Gods, haven't we all felt that way at some point or other? I just... I don't know. The emotion in those two words is just so, so palpable. Amazing. Beautiful.

Also, no spelling errors that I could immediately point out. Kudos!

L. Kantenseter Teh Fellow MidgetNya