Reviews for Night Ripples
Tawny Owl chapter 1 . 9/7/2008
That was very absorbing. You create a complete world in so few words. It's interesting becasue I seem to get a glimpse of the personality of the characters as well, although I can't put my finger on why.

It's the sort of thing I'd probably come back to and read again anyway. Thanks for posting it.
Whitney Carter chapter 1 . 6/20/2007
This piece is kinda frustrating to me. You introduced an exotic place with dangerous animals and an awareness of the world around us that people are so often lacking…but that was it. You stopped and there wasn’t anymore. Vaguely wondering. It leaves my mind spinning and wandering.
xDancingintheRainx chapter 1 . 6/18/2007
I like your descriptions of the surroundings. It makes me feel like I'm there in the story. I like the ending of both pieces, and I've never read something like this before. Nice work.
Sir Scott chapter 1 . 6/8/2007
I haven't read anything like that before on here. So I'll add it to my favorites.