Reviews for Shift
Lola Smith chapter 15 . 5/28/2016
Have you considered getting this published? It really is a good story.
Nyx'sReincarnation chapter 15 . 7/8/2014
This was such an amazing story! I love the unique romance especially. I'm actually writing a story for camp NaNoWriMo that's similar to this. The characters and plots aren't very similar, but the part about people having powers is. That's what intrigued me originally. I'm glad there's someone else out there who enjoys this kind of story as well.
I enjoyed your characters, especially Talor. She reminds me of a more fleshed out version of Rosalie from Twilight. Your grammar is pretty good as well, though you could use a little work in making sentences more concise.
Keep up the amazing work! :)
Tarah xXx
audacityofmymind chapter 1 . 9/12/2013
I really like it.

Usually I find supernatural stories of this kind cliche and predictable but I really liked the way you balanced things. There was romance and suspense and action, just the right amount.

To be honest, I kind of shipped Jason and Casey, even though I totally knew Donovan would turn out to be a good person in the end. Nevertheless, I expected to see a little more of the real Donovan, and a bit more interaction between him and Casey.

There are a lot of things I could say, but to sum it up, I really enjoyed the story and your style. I hope you write a sequel or a one shot, I would definitely read it.

Great job!
Guest chapter 4 . 3/21/2013
Okay. I'd totally want to make out with the villain too. Seriously. Hot villains are awesome.
Creatures chapter 15 . 7/10/2011
oh nom nom nom :D

Good work, this story was awesome! I am glad I had the pleasure to read it :)
She Who Loves Pineapples chapter 15 . 1/15/2010

That was great!

Defintely one of the better stories here I've read.

I liked some of the twists at the end, all though some (like Donovan using mind control) were a bit predictable.

But seriously, it was good.

I'd like to see this made into a series.
She Who Loves Pineapples chapter 9 . 1/7/2010
O.O Who killed Mike?
arabee chapter 15 . 12/29/2009
this was an awesome story :)

i'm a casey/jason shipper though, so i was kind of rooting for that but the ending was still really good!

thanks for the great read and keep it up!


She Who Loves Pineapples chapter 8 . 12/22/2009
Wow. ._. She's dense. XD
She Who Loves Pineapples chapter 7 . 11/23/2009
...suspensful now. I really like that twist about how Mike was "forced" to attack Casey...
She Who Loves Pineapples chapter 5 . 11/23/2009
Yay action.
She Who Loves Pineapples chapter 1 . 11/6/2009
...I finally got around to starting to read the remake... yeah...

Good start...
Silly Little Storywriter chapter 10 . 6/18/2009
It pains me to write this review. I like your other work.

The Executioners was a reat story. HOWEVER, Casey is so stupid and dense. Did you mean to write her as such a... a hate to say it, but a Mary Sue?

It's a shame, because she started out fairly cool.

I'm gonna keep reading, I just hope she stops being a... well... a moron.

I'm sorry. I just felt like I had to be honest.

Feel free to rip the shit of me, if you wish.

cherrypiesizzle chapter 15 . 4/28/2009
Whoa. That was so this really does remind me of X files.
cherrypiesizzle chapter 9 . 4/28/2009
OH NO! I felt like swearing, but CRAP, Donovan is the mind-control guy. How can he just control her like that! "Forget about the sword" to Casey...does he even care about her? I don't know, I feel like his character is not that substantial, I read some other reviews on your story and they have said the same thing. If I had to say the character whom I felt was the most 'alive' I guess you could say, it would be Jason. He's like this ray of sunshine - in how realistic he feels- in this story.
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