Reviews for Shift
blueangel916 chapter 15 . 12/13/2008
great ending and i say you should do a sequel :D
Lainiee chapter 15 . 12/13/2008
Very solid story! A lot of action, a bit of drama... I enjoyed it very much. :D

The only thing was that I kinda saw everything coming- at least halfway through. A lot of things which I just assumed were very obvious were things the characters just didn't even think about, and that was a little frustrating. I think the best one you did though was Donavan's mind control and how it effected Casey- that was very subtle and you had a very tight control on revealing that in little bits. Even park coming out evil at the end wasn't that big of a surprise- perhaps if you worked on the part where Casey goes to him to tell him about everything and make him a little more surprised/dense? His easygoing-ness was what tipped me off.

Oh, and personally I didn't like Casey choosing Van at the end, but that's just me liking Jason a lot more.

Anyway, really good job! So glad I got to read from beginning to end straight, because I would've died from suspense if not.
Grenna-Chae chapter 15 . 12/13/2008
Wow, that was so so good! I cannot believe that Parks was evil, even though he seemes a bit... strange. Anyway, that was such a good story, and Jordan's healing power is awesome! And I'm so glad that Donovan turned out okay, in the end, at least. You're such an excellent writer!
Venus Smurf1 chapter 15 . 12/12/2008
Beautiful ending, though I do feel bad for Jason. really made this last chapter a finale to remember. Perfect amount of action, perfect amount of humor, and perfect amount of the mushy goodness that is romance. I loved it.
blurrylights chapter 15 . 12/12/2008
YAY! I'm so glad Van was still good...and it was all the mean prof's fault. That was the perfect ending. Sure, I feel a little bad for Jason, but that's okay. He gets Tori!

Seriously though, that was a perfect story. It was tons of fun to read, and you did a totally amazing job. The description was excellent, the characters were really exciting, and the plot really cool. I especially loved how they ended up on the field where they first kissed at the end. Great job!
Miopic Cat chapter 14 . 12/11/2008
I've guessed it! The professor is the ultimate bad guy. Haha... but your story really interesting tough. I hope she ended with Jason, he's great guy... *flush. Donovan is such a bastard... naah!

Waiting for the last chapter!:-)
Venus Smurf1 chapter 14 . 12/7/2008
Well, I admittedly already guessed that the professor would be a bad guy-not because you really gave it away, but because that's just the way their luck seems to be going. Still, this was an insanely exciting chapter. Loved every minute of it, and can't wait for more!
Rhea Larkin chapter 14 . 12/6/2008
Oh, Donovan. Oh, Parks.

I should have known/suspected. In fact, I think I might have. Still, once again, you have provided us with a veritable cliffhanger, madam. Curse it all! Still, I'm very much looking forward to the ending, natürlich. (Btw, I could have helped you out with the German, but it's fine now as far as I can tell. ;D)

This was one action-packed much happened that my head was whirling! I was just thinking, though, that I'd love to see this as a movie. It's an excellent climax. Anyway, random thoughts...I like how you somewhat redeemed Taylor. She's still a bitch, but at least she's not a full-blown killer. That's good; it was getting far too easy to despise her and not take her seriously as a decent human being.

Also, the question of Casey's feelings for Donovan...personally, even though I feel like it's not entirely his fault, I think she should move on. Nostalgia is powerful, but it doesn't mean everything will be all right, even disregarding Donovan's "evil" streak. (Btw, "evil candy shop" made me laugh.) I think she should learn to move on from that old flame and be with someone who's truly good for her, i.e., Jason. But it's up to you, of course. :)

Anyway, an exciting installment! Eagerly anticipating the next (and last - oh no how sad!) chapter!


Layla the fiend chapter 8 . 12/6/2008
NO! NO! NO! He's bad, Casey! Shit! Agh!
Layla the fiend chapter 7 . 12/6/2008

Casey's gonna be like "FUCK no."
Layla the fiend chapter 6 . 12/6/2008
Ah, in love with villains.
Layla the fiend chapter 5 . 12/6/2008
Yeah, well, she's DEFINITELY not gonna see him as a bad guy now.

M, Donovan.
Layla the fiend chapter 4 . 12/5/2008
Last line? Brilliant.
GhostReader chapter 14 . 12/5/2008
Heya, I'm one of those readers who follow the entire story but never review. Shame on me, I know. But I'm a German native speaker and this one sentence (hate to break it to you :P) is really horribly wrong so I simply have to put it should be like this: "Hallo, ist da jemand?" ;)

I'm looking forward to the next chapter and I'm really curious as to how you're gonna solve this in only one chapter! You sure waited until the very end for the big bang. I knew there was something fishy about that professor but I didn't know what. I guess I was focusing too much on Donovan.

Happy typing with that last chapter and thanks!
Lady Katreina chapter 14 . 12/4/2008
Obviously I still like Donovan, my first thought, and I was going to scream it in CAPS was "So is wasn't Donovan." Then I realized it still could have been him- unless "Robert" never had/has powers...

Is it because Donovan was interested in psychology that he came into his powers or because Robert forced them out or that Donovan didn't have his own powers...?

I think it's because he's a bad boy that he's still liked. Though the thought of a slimy smile really brings down the notches.

Thank you for updating.
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