Oh, very interesting! so unexpected!

nothing much to say, really, i'm kinda in shock right now about what happened.

so, good luck with the next chapter!

Oh my god...this chapter was scary! Taylor has so many issues! And wow...I knew the prof was iffy. Great chapter, and update soon!

Failing at the seams ay Donny boy?

Thank you for this story- (honestly I prefer Donovan, He shouldn't be such a jerk though.) 'Course Jason's wonderful for her. Oh the intricacies.

Wow, this is amazing! I can't wait to find out what happens!

why am I getting the feeling that prof parks isn't all good?

Wow, pretty intense. And so good, even though it was short.

Well, I can't really say anything that I haven't already said, so good luck with the next chapter.

Yay! Go Cassy! I wonder what's going to happen at the professor's house :P UPDATE SOON!

Terra

I love the story!

i just finished reading it and can't wait to read more keep it up :D

Grr taylor is such a b*tch she deserves to be whacked.. actually so does donovan. cant for the endin tho

Donovan and Taylor are so evil! They almost got caught, and he wanted to try again? Idiot...anyway, awesome chapter. Update soon!

Sorry it took so long for a review, I've been so busy! And I'm in kind of a rush now, so this won't be very comprehensive as my previous ones...but it's a great chapter that really sets things up for a dramatic climax! I'm still not 100% convinced that Donovan's behind everything, but mainly that's because I'm bracing myself in case you throw a huge shocker our way. If I'm wrong, then oh well, I'm just silly. But I can never be too sure!

The depth of Taylor's power is frightening, a very unique take on a standard "fire" power. And I was so happy that Bridget had her moment of defiance. Like Casey, though, you've got me all worried over Tori, and Parks strikes me as a little strange, in that he didn't have as extreme reactions as I would have suspected. Still, I'm glad he's finally in on things. Seemed strange that he would be so oblivious for so long.

Anyway, overall it's a great chapter and I can't wait to see how it all plays out! So far, it's been masterfully constructed, so I'm sure you won't disappoint! :)

What happened to Tori? And why is Parks so suspicious? Gah...this is killing me. And I'm glad your feeling better now...bronchitis is scary! Anyway, Please update soon!

Oh! Really good chapter. I didn't think that the profssor would believe them, but...

Anyways, I'm really looking forward to the next chapter! It's nearly a cliffhanger. I don't like those.

And congrats for kicking bronchitis butt. (I've never had that before, but I've heard that it's terrible...)

Good luck with the next chapter!

OMG WHY ARE THEY TRUSTING PARKS? Well, maybe he'll turn out to be a good guy, but until then...I don't think so...:P

I'm glad you won the battle against bronchitis . and I hope you update soon!

Terra

OMG THIS IS SO GOOD! I was doing Chem homework when I got the alert on this and had to stop everything to read it LOL except now it's late and I still have homework...ah well. Yikes, I know what you mean by busy...well update asap! This is getting REALLY good! And I'm glad that Jason and Casey FINALLY hooked up! I hope Tori is OK...

Terra

Oh my god! This chapter was so scary...and Tori freaked...that's going to be bad. I knew Donovan was really bad...poor Bridget. :( Anyway, totally well written, and really intriguing. Try to update as soon as you can!