Reviews for Shift
xXxWritersXBlockxXx chapter 2 . 6/15/2007
Great story so far! I can't wait to reed more!

-Terra
Rhea Larkin chapter 2 . 6/15/2007
This is a nice way to thicken the plot - again giving just enough to leave the reader wanting more. I have to say that the few characters you've introduced so far are quite real. I kinda love Casey because I can relate to her (she's a little Natalie-ish in her approach towards boys, eh?), except that I would TOTALLY believe Jason. Well, I'd be in shock, but I'd definitely want to have the ability to fly or teleport or whatever it was she did (I also like how it's not quite clear yet).

Are you going to go into detail with the parapsych stuff? Because it seems interesting, especially in the context of the rest of the plot. :D Looking forward to your updates!

By the way, it was quite a pleasant surprise that you've started to read and review my story. :) Take your time with it. I'm afraid it doesn't hold a candle to any of your stories, but I'm glad you like it so far and I appreciate your taking the time to read it :D
JustCallMeGiggles chapter 1 . 6/14/2007
All I can say is Whoa. I honestly thought that when the truck was coming, she was going to find out she could fly or turn invisible. Incredible and very well written.
Kendal chapter 1 . 6/13/2007
Oh, lovely.

First of all, I really like the name Jason, and I don't know why. Probably because I had a crush on one when I was about twelve. God, that seems so long ago.

Evil of you to cut him off in the middle of his question, though I suspect that will be intentional. I'm interested to see where this goes. Especially after the very first paragraphs... Oh, yay.

I'm glad you're back.
Rhea Larkin chapter 1 . 6/9/2007
Intriguing. :) I have to say that I love your taglines and your first chapters. They always get me hooked without giving too much away. You're awesome, and I missed you and your writing. Welcome back! I'm very much looking forward to reading this. :D
Arialla chapter 1 . 6/8/2007
cool, superpowers ) I love those kinds of stories.

keep it up and update soon this time! )

~ Aria
Jess chapter 1 . 6/8/2007
Very nice. I really liked the suspenseful moments and how everything flowed together - and I never even saw that truck coming, haha. Your characters are very realistic. Great job!

Can't wait for the next installment.
Jessie Gee chapter 1 . 6/8/2007
I can tell this is going to go somewhere good. :P
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