Reviews for i swear i'm a masochist
young and the reckless chapter 1 . 4/8/2009
oh the contrast and comparison is stunning. i absolutely love it.
softersin chapter 1 . 12/10/2008
this was completely amazing.

i can relate to it so much.

daniellegypt chapter 1 . 12/7/2008
The only way I can describe this is sexy.

You're a fantastic poet.
XsilentXescapeX chapter 1 . 10/13/2008
i absolutely love the last two lines

kit feral chapter 1 . 9/20/2008
I love the phrase 'easy alligator smile.'

This is good in that it tells a story without forgetting the emotions. That isn't always so easy. Nice work.

"in his car, i left the windows open to feel the breeze on my face

and he left them open to push me out"

I liked that a lot.
smile for the sunshine chapter 1 . 12/30/2007
wow. i have so much empathy and think i can relate to every line. definitely a favorite. amazing. good work.
relapse into change chapter 1 . 11/28/2007
i love this

it have great imagery and absolutly beautiful :]

Doxology chapter 1 . 6/18/2007
Yes, you're a poet. Great job.

Peace and Love

~ Lifted
eldritch efflorescence chapter 1 . 6/10/2007
Beautiful, nicely done. It had a lovely flow to it, and I love the visual at the end.
Tytherpol chapter 1 . 6/10/2007
i completely love this.