oh the contrast and comparison is stunning. i absolutely love it.

this was completely amazing.

i can relate to it so much.

:)

The only way I can describe this is sexy.

You're a fantastic poet.

i absolutely love the last two lines

~silent

I love the phrase 'easy alligator smile.'

This is good in that it tells a story without forgetting the emotions. That isn't always so easy. Nice work.

"in his car, i left the windows open to feel the breeze on my face

and he left them open to push me out"

I liked that a lot.

wow. i have so much empathy and think i can relate to every line. definitely a favorite. amazing. good work.

i love this

it have great imagery and absolutly beautiful :]

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Yes, you're a poet. Great job.

Peace and Love

~ Lifted

Beautiful, nicely done. It had a lovely flow to it, and I love the visual at the end.

i completely love this.