Reviews for Kiss Your Dust
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 9/5/2007
I like this... its kinda pathetic, but I have been that pathetically in love so I totally relate.. very nicely described.. the ending is especially great.. nice job
recycle rhymes chapter 1 . 6/17/2007
some of your word choices felt out of place like "as you advance forward" - it just didn't have that natural feeling and flow. anyway i like the last stanza. keep on going :)