Reviews for Tranquility
Thenardier chapter 1 . 7/9/2008
It's amazing how this haiku creates both a sense of relief and dread in me. An exciting feat. I liked this a lot.
Chidori Nadare chapter 1 . 7/13/2007
This is such a nice haiku from you. It has dark tones in it that's not overdone. Very nice one...

-C.N
Basara chapter 1 . 6/12/2007
inner achievement over hard problems...

nice...
the truth beneath the rose chapter 1 . 6/10/2007
Wow...this seriously just blows me away. It summarizes all those feelings you feel build up inside you when you're stressed out and you just feel like you wanna tear your hair out or something! It seems hopeless at the time, and basically you wonder, 'how am I ever going to get through this?' But, then when you overcome those obstacles in your life it's just like breathing: you just take a fresh breath of air and exhale. It's such a relief. Just like this haiku. _

[goes to check out more of your work]
a silenced revolution chapter 1 . 6/9/2007
There's something about this that seems ominous in a way... Had you used "knowing" instead of just "thinking" it wouldn't have seemed so forboding... Anyway, I like the dark over tone. Nice haiku.
Ashelin chapter 1 . 6/9/2007
I love that relief. After you've been through something so challanging, and then you realize it is done. Just so peaceful. Thank you so much for the reviews! I really appreciate it. I'll review more of your stuff right now.

Ashelin