aww, are you still writing this? i really hope so because i would be more than willing to read it!

very good, the only problem is that this seems short (i know, i'm contridicting myself all over) with all the one sentences then enter, but i got used to it. i love this story, you are such a good writer. :D

my life seems like this!

and i hope elliot asks her out. :D :D (i'm such a hopeless romantic)

Good idea, but I don't understand the title quite yet. Your writing style is nice and there is great potential. The only thing I see as a problem would be the length. I think it would be better broken up a little, but I honestly couldn't stop reading. Good job!

Go Hannah! I really liked her poem too. Great story, keep up the good work!

*laugh evilly and add crazy glue* *toss Samuel, Claudia and Mariette and forcefully close the locker door* *walk away, snickering evily, saying something resembling like "I am your vangeful gardian, Hannah!"*

As good as always, and always tough Claudia was not so fine *sneer* Update soon!

Now now, dont be scared! Now, lets see how many arrogant boys and bitchy girls we can trap in a locker, shall we? lol kidding, but they need punishment! Im with you, Hannah!

Another great chapter! Kepp them cominge

Really good story, Hannah is lovable and the story is detailled and original. It could become a real book as far as my opinion go :). Keep it up!

Really really good! I loove the story! Please updat!

No problem! I know how hard it is starting out, (i used to do fanfics) but people will start reading and reviewing! Just keep chapters coming as good as this one, and people will notice it!

Another really good chapter! I can't wait for the next bit!

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This is a really good start! Keep going, i def want to read more!