Reviews for His Joke
10000trees chapter 4 . 7/16/2009
aww, are you still writing this? i really hope so because i would be more than willing to read it!
tangledwebweweave chapter 2 . 4/29/2009
very good, the only problem is that this seems short (i know, i'm contridicting myself all over) with all the one sentences then enter, but i got used to it. i love this story, you are such a good writer. :D

my life seems like this!

and i hope elliot asks her out. :D :D (i'm such a hopeless romantic)
tangledwebweweave chapter 1 . 4/29/2009
Good idea, but I don't understand the title quite yet. Your writing style is nice and there is great potential. The only thing I see as a problem would be the length. I think it would be better broken up a little, but I honestly couldn't stop reading. Good job!
Gothic-Fire-Wolf chapter 4 . 6/23/2007
Go Hannah! I really liked her poem too. Great story, keep up the good work!
Etharizen chapter 4 . 6/19/2007
*laugh evilly and add crazy glue* *toss Samuel, Claudia and Mariette and forcefully close the locker door* *walk away, snickering evily, saying something resembling like "I am your vangeful gardian, Hannah!"*

As good as always, and always tough Claudia was not so fine *sneer* Update soon!
Etharizen chapter 3 . 6/17/2007
Now now, dont be scared! Now, lets see how many arrogant boys and bitchy girls we can trap in a locker, shall we? lol kidding, but they need punishment! Im with you, Hannah!
saxgoddess chapter 3 . 6/17/2007
Another great chapter! Kepp them cominge
Etharizen chapter 2 . 6/16/2007
Really good story, Hannah is lovable and the story is detailled and original. It could become a real book as far as my opinion go :). Keep it up!
Randall K chapter 2 . 6/11/2007
Really really good! I loove the story! Please updat!
saxgoddess chapter 2 . 6/11/2007
No problem! I know how hard it is starting out, (i used to do fanfics) but people will start reading and reviewing! Just keep chapters coming as good as this one, and people will notice it!

Another really good chapter! I can't wait for the next bit!

saxgoddess chapter 1 . 6/10/2007
This is a really good start! Keep going, i def want to read more!