I have to disagree. As a visually impared person myself I've led blind people every so often. Maybe we didn't get there without a bruise or two but we haven't made it to hell quite yet ;) hehe

In all seriousness though, Its good. I particuarly like the verse

Once you hit rock bottom

Is when you finally begin to heal.

Once you break free of the lies

Is when you finally find the truth.

because its so so true.

Very powerful, and also very well done. I especially love this verse "Piece by piece by piece." The repetition there is achingly good. Love it.

I really liked this, it showed great power.

Well done!