|Reviews for All Humans Are Created Equal|
| Gray Angel chapter 1 . 6/28/2007
Bravo, I like this poem quite a lot.
| Chidori Nadare chapter 1 . 6/21/2007
I like this a lot. Good use of metaphors. Very dark poem, which is good. Nice poem.
| Hp-Princess23 chapter 1 . 6/12/2007
I like it! your choice of words was really good, it wasn't complicated but it was dark and angsty but not over-the-top. my favourite line was "Down in the park the lake is reflecting back your
Own reflection your own humiliation and hesitation" i like the..repetition? there's a word for that but i don't remember what it is..
| Ashelin chapter 1 . 6/12/2007
I loved this! I'm so glad that I could have inspired you to try something new! You did it very well. The last lines (the bold ones) were probably my favorite. I also adored "When your life is hanging in tatters and you never/Hear you very own laughter..." I loved it! You did a wonderful job, and should be proud of this! Great job!
| a silenced revolution chapter 1 . 6/10/2007
This is excellent. I love it. Dark, cynical, good use of metaphors and so on. I'm adding it to my favourites. Keep writing!
| MarvellousMarvin chapter 1 . 6/10/2007
i really like this. once i got into the style it worked really well and the last three lines were very clever