|Reviews for Never Good Enough|
| Vanilla Tea chapter 1 . 2/24/2008
This poem is pretty good overall, well-written and intense but thre are a couple things i would change. in the lines "for goodness sake/you make me want to jump into a lake/ toward me, your emotions are so fake" the rhyme seems forced. and the line "my self-esteem, my thinking, my doings, the way i see, the way i have to be" is a bit long and doesnt fit too well. it could easily be split into two lines, probably so its "my self-esteem, my thinking, my doings/ the way i see, the way i have to be" other than that its fine, nice job.
-SB, review marathon
| roughdiamond5 chapter 1 . 10/12/2007
OMG this is it! This explains everything! I've been looking so long for a way to express my feelings about school and stuff and it's right here in front of me in black and white and red! Well done, extremely well done!
| LONELYxTAG chapter 1 . 6/10/2007
wow thats really intense i could practically picture the emotions really good going into my favs!