Reviews for Donovan's Log Revised
EllyZeller chapter 1 . 2/24/2013
You lied to me saying I wouldn't enjoy this. I loved it. I had to finish reading it in the morning because I kept hearing noises on my roof and well, freaking out was in order. You made an awesome job with the descriptions since I got really clear -oh god terrifying- images on my mind while reading.

Thank you for the amazing reading!
Red December chapter 1 . 7/1/2008
I really enjoyed your story. It was creepy with the right amount of suspense and confusion to make things even creepier. And having it written in a log like this was brilliant.
Angela Dawne chapter 1 . 6/23/2007
I started reading this last night...then I decided I would finish it in the morning with everyone awake and the light streaming in through the window.

Brilliant, my friend. Excellent work. Though I may not sleep tonight.

(On my favorites)

- Angela Dawne
ShyGhostie chapter 1 . 6/14/2007
This will haunt my nightmares! So creepy...I absolutly love it. I really hope you write more things like this. The plot is entirely different than 2001: Space Odessey, but the level of creepiness is very comparable. The descriptions were stunning, but not overwhelming.

The only real thing I would have found confusing if you had not mentioned it is the switch from Christopher Ridley to Donovan's Log. It would have been interesting to have breaks from the Log and maybe have Chris discuss the entry with someone else - to get 2 different views on it. It might also add some emphasis to the horror aspects of Donovan's Log as well...but I could be wrong!

Please write a sequel to this or something! I couldn't go to sleep after I read it. I kept envisioning Kris getting pulled into the gears of the engine. Nice Job!
Undrahas chapter 1 . 6/10/2007
ah, now it makes sense. the ending is still a little confusing, but i love the comments from the guy. you know what? i think the bodies were sucked into space. i don't know why but i think thats what happned.

but anyway this still is good. your really good at writing horror/sci-fi stories. keep it up.