Reviews for But I Couldn't Have Him |
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![]() ![]() This is not angst...but I like it :-) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm loovin' it ! :D not typical Jock/nerd but nerd/cheerleader.I like that :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() SO CUTE ! ! ! ! ! :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() It was actually very original. :) to me. |
![]() ![]() ![]() THIS STORY HAS POTENTIAL (ESPECIALLY FOR US THAT WERE NERDS IN SCHOOL LOL) HOWEVER AT ONE POINT IN MY LIFE BEING SOMEWHAT LIKE YOUR MAIN CHARACTER (HER CRUSH) IF SOMETHING LIKE THAT HAD HAPPENED TO ME I MIGHT HAVE BEEN TOTALLY SURPRISED AND NOT QUITE AS RESERVED AS HE WAS IN YOUR STORY. BUT PROBABLY WOULD GET THE HINT AFTER THE MULTIPLE KISSES. (HEY SOME OF US NERD ARE DENSE WHEN IT COMES TO THE OPPOSITE SEX LOL) WE MAY HAVE IT ALL UNDER CONTROL (EDUCATIONALLY BUT BE REALLY DUMB WHEN IT COMES TO ASSOCIATING WITH "CHEERLEADER IN A GUYS CASE OR THE TOTALLY HOT JOCK IN A GIRLS CASE. OH WELL ENOUGH OF MY RAMBLING IS THERE GOING TO BE MORE OF THIS? |
![]() ![]() ![]() loved it...mainly because i love nerds...jocks are overrated |
![]() ![]() ![]() awesome story :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was great! I must admit that I too love a good romance as long as it comes with a happy ending! I really like the concept you presented here. It is kind of the cliched plot, but you have added enough of your own spin that is most certainly appealing. If you are looking for an amazing romance novelist on FictionPress, I recommend Jennifer Leigh. She's amazing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow. Brilliant. Loved it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() aww this was really good ) totally non-cliche |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, Brilliant, Great, Good - and I'll stop there, because the rest I disagree with and the last one - corner - I don't know what it is. Good job, my friend. I like it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Haha, that was cute :) Good job! -Aria |
![]() ![]() ![]() I don't understand how this is angst or how the title fits, since this is fluffy and cute and albeit predictable. It's well-written and a little too happily-ever-after, but I still like it. (: I think I'll go add it to my c2. (: |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow. I just have to say that. Wow. Anyways, I wished it wasn't so short because it was really good! I'm sick of all the popular guys and nerd girls stories. Yay for the opposite! Cheers! |
![]() ![]() ![]() adorable :) |