Reviews for Repercussions
Lorenz S chapter 1 . 10/8/2007
Oh God! I love this story. I wish all cheaters and those who are attempting to do so will have endless nightmares like that til they learn their lesson. wicked grin (sorry I don't know how demonstrate it in graphics)
Esquirella chapter 1 . 6/11/2007
Pretty powerful piece.
Rock on an Ocean Shore chapter 1 . 6/11/2007
Wow. Great one-shot. The description of the execution was exhilarating.

I especially loved the ending. :D Great job.
Charlotte-Stevens chapter 1 . 6/10/2007
Crazily twisting story, a little confusing until the end where the cause of all this started from guilt, is finally revealed.

However, both Michael's confusion and dispair along with the execution scene was written really well.

"He can feel Daniel’s approaching footsteps on the wood. The crowd’s screams only intensify as..." - A good way to continue the flow of the scene, with his lost sense of sight.
Calix Vincent chapter 1 . 6/10/2007
Great short story! You're a wonderful writer and it was nice to read something that didn't have a million errors in it. ; I liked the way you set it was really dramatic and it showed Michael's inner emotions and guilt at what had happened. Great work.
ricco-the-penguin chapter 1 . 6/10/2007
ooh, creepy. and straightedge! also, this sounded so kinky.

I like this. it's nice and creepy, and I like the end.