Reviews for The Pursuit of Chocolate
Belly boo1099 chapter 13 . 8/15/2013
Naww cute story, it was quite enjoyable!
brinalovesyouxx chapter 13 . 12/29/2012
The story of Mark and Nat is beautfil! I wish i had that. Now that ive also read Nate and Hannah's story, is that the last of the Zephyrs series? Or is there another story with Jess and Dan? Just wondering.. But u love all the stories ive read so far of yours, keep up the awesome work! :D xx
heal me forever chapter 13 . 10/26/2012
BOY..WHY HAVE TO BE U DIS MAAZING WRITER seriously such aemotional stry...god bless ! nd hoping dat dey stay forver together as in 'happliy ever after' good stry :) mark-fan girl
heal me forever chapter 12 . 10/26/2012
Mark had stayed with me every step of the way, until I decided to go where he couldn't follow. When I chose to go to France he had simply sighed and said "I should have expected this," and kissed the top of my head and told me to be safe and let me go. Without questions and without drama, he had just let me go and get on with my life, make my own mistakes; hoping I would come back to him.I AM TOUCHED BY HIM GOD CAN ANYONE BE LIKE MARK...SIGH I WISH REAL LIFE IS LIKE DIS :(
heal me forever chapter 11 . 10/26/2012
"Mark told me you don't believe he's in love with you. I think you know that he loves you, but as to being IN love…" She paused, "there is a saying that goes: A friend's love says 'If you ever need something, I'll be there'; while True Love says 'You'll never need anything, because I'll be there'. Just ask yourself what Mark loves says… it might help you to find your way."MY FAV LINES OF D STRY DES LINES HAVE PURE EMOTION :)
Cplehg chapter 13 . 8/19/2012
ClownMask chapter 13 . 8/17/2012
I loved this one. Love the styles i feel lucky to be able to read your work. Thank for your consistency (alway a good clavel story when i need one)

from Nairobi
Preposterous chapter 12 . 5/7/2012
Mark is so adorable. I want a Mark.
Preposterous chapter 13 . 5/5/2012
Love this story! Another masterpiece... but then again, can't say I expected anything else.
sarah.evangelina chapter 13 . 10/7/2011
Okay. I ended up liking her(: lol. The story was amazing as always(: I live all of your stories((:
Sarah.evangelina chapter 7 . 10/7/2011
I can't stag Nat at this point she reminds me of how my ex and I used to be and how he still is. Lol but I love mark(: I feel his pain, literally
theloverslife chapter 6 . 8/15/2011
"Mark smiled in a way that made me very conscious that he was a man."

Good lord, I love that line. Re-reading this story for the hundredth time.
momo3069 chapter 12 . 2/1/2011
I realy dont know anymore what I should write here. I have said it all. I love your writing, Im in love with your ideas and I cant stop reading your stories. Even if I have read them all at least four times already.
sunbeam07 chapter 1 . 11/26/2010
love this story! I've read it a million times. Just one problem: in this story you named Jason and Lauren's daughter Nathalie but in Jason and Lauren's original story you named her Natalie. Just something to fix if you ever edit these stories.
all4hydration chapter 13 . 8/7/2010
*squel* thats all i have to say in this matter
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