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Daniel Hayes chapter 1 . 3/26/2009
Hey, it's me. Well you know I liked this story so, I am sending you this review just to show you that I signed up for fictionpress. I look forward to writing many things to this site.
moongazer7 chapter 1 . 1/25/2008
It's different, and it's good. I could actually feel it. I think you do it well, and that you describe it well. Good work! Keep it up!

Skeeter the Groundhog chapter 1 . 6/17/2007
wow, this is really good! simple, yet heartfelt and very natural, sounds like it is coming directly from the heart. great job portraying all the emotions.

and also, thanks so much for reading my story, so this review is a little something in return for the favor.

keep writing!

-Skeeter the Groundhog
disused account chapter 1 . 6/11/2007
Your story was rather good. I really hope this was fiction and this never happened or happens to you. I must admit this was very different from the other one you wrote and I only hope that if you rewrite it there’s a happier ending.