Reviews for Alone With The Dead: Memento Mori
yuu277 chapter 14 . 11/10/2010
fantastic! once i started i couldnt stop. Great story, great characters, great writing... thank for posting this here, because i loved it! Im a big fan of the infected series but i think i enjoyed this story even more!

please keep writing
blkkitty chapter 14 . 8/29/2010
As much as I love the Infected Series (and I do!), I really think that Alone with the Dead is a fantastic series in its own right. Any chance of more down the road? I'm hoping so... as much as I look forward to reading about Roan, I'm not so keen on the Holden character. I feel like I'm supposed to care about him, but I can't - I just find him annoying and a bit of a story staller until Roan comes back. Fiona is cool, probably because she is who she is - an assistant. Same with Seb. Their characters fit the story lines well... but Dylan just seems to be a bit of an afterthought lately as well - not like Paris who at least seemed to have more of impact on Roan's character.

But in Alone with the Dead - your characters seem so well "integrated" in regards to the main character and to the stories themselves. I find myself wondering not just what's been happening with Gryphon, but also with Mr. Aronofsky, Ruby, Ray, Clay, Shane etc.

Maybe that's why it appeals to me... I read Infected because of Roan, but I re-read Alone with the Dead because of all of the characters. I hope they get to speak again!

Thanks for all of your great stories...
blackrose214 chapter 14 . 7/13/2010
Hey there! Im so glad you updated the rest of the story as well. I love it. The characters, especially Gryph and his... occupants?... have grown on me. Keep up writing, youre doing a pretty damn good job.
Nazira chapter 1 . 7/7/2010
Just sat down and read these final chapters (of this section) a nice wrapping up of the story and I like that Gryphon is becoming reflective - he can't grow up and and into himself without that. For me a lead character has to have that learning from his/her experiences going on otherwise what is the point. So I liked the introduction of the Gods thing too. The story chapter 9 on the first page you have Rachel say 'he was just sitting there' then nsay 'how do you think he broke the mirror if he was just standing there'.

thanks so much for the reading
Thyn chapter 8 . 1/5/2010
Very good. I actually checked how much Alone With the Dead costs, too much :). 10 dollars paperpack, maybe, 15 dollars, no. And shipping added, no way.

But for a free book, excellent. I hope you continue.